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From: Jamie Pine <32987599+jamiepine@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 10 Mar 2022 11:06:56 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] grammar

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 Spacedrive is an open source, cross platform file manager app. Powered by a secure, virtual distributed filesystem (<a href="#what-is-vdfs">VDFS</a>) written in Rust. <a href="https://spacedrive.app"><strong>Learn more »</strong></a>
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-The model for data storage today is; subscribe to a cloud provider and get storage space. With that space come handy tools for organization (photo albums, shared folders etc.). The problem comes once you outgrow that space and the tools aren't so handy anymore. Your data doesn't translate well across OS platforms and between competing cloud services—and that's not to mention privacy.
+The model for data storage today is; subscribe to a cloud provider and get storage space. With it come handy tools for organization (photo albums, shared folders etc.). The problem comes once you outgrow that space and the tools aren't so handy anymore. This data doesn't flow between OS platforms and across competing cloud services ...and that's not to mention privacy.
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 Spacedrive brings those tools out of the cloud and onto your devices. To organize, encode, encrypt, share, and preserve the data that defines you, at unlimited scale.